-good sketches with sufficient information in the brochure -brochure is well done,it is very detailed and clear for users to understand.the group presented in a systhematic way.gd sketches.put map for each zone to make the brochure clearer -interesting proposal,detailed explanation of proposal experience but lack of analysis -should be fluent,andreau should stop saying 'ah',don't leave white spaces in the brochure,it is better to mix the sketches with the picture they should look at the audience also instead of loooking only at the lecturers -wahidah sounded unprepared and lost at first,there was several long pauses.andreau was relying too much on the powerpoint and he was reading from the text but he got no pauses or awkward silence in his presentation.colin repeat the same word too many times maybe because he wants to emphasise the point but it was okay.indra was confident. -trail clearly defines the concept of wind
Elisha: Should have more eye contact with the audience and not read off the slides too much. But concept was brought across well, and clear. Sketches were good and detailed too. Overall, well done.
-good sketches with sufficient information in the brochure
ReplyDelete-brochure is well done,it is very detailed and clear for users to understand.the group presented in a systhematic way.gd sketches.put map for each zone to make the brochure clearer
-interesting proposal,detailed explanation of proposal experience but lack of analysis
-should be fluent,andreau should stop saying 'ah',don't leave white spaces in the brochure,it is better to mix the sketches with the picture
they should look at the audience also instead of loooking only at the lecturers
-wahidah sounded unprepared and lost at first,there was several long pauses.andreau was relying too much on the powerpoint and he was reading from the text but he got no pauses or awkward silence in his presentation.colin repeat the same word too many times maybe because he wants to emphasise the point but it was okay.indra was confident.
-trail clearly defines the concept of wind
Elisha: Should have more eye contact with the audience and not read off the slides too much. But concept was brought across well, and clear. Sketches were good and detailed too. Overall, well done.
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