The fond use is too small. "you're killing us while you walk" on the cover page is not appropriate because the users might not want to go through the trail. However the presentation is clear.
Elisha : Very clear and obvious concept. The cover page title was turning off.Brochure was boring though, too plain and its quite big, so not very user friendly in terms of handling/keeping. Try to focus on objective of trail, which is highlighting importance of the existing plants/trees. But overall,presentation is clear and organized.
Confidence in verbal presentation.
ReplyDeleteCan be improve
Inappropriate caption.
The fond use is too small. "you're killing us while you walk" on the cover page is not appropriate because the users might not want to go through the trail. However the presentation is clear.
ReplyDeleteinteresting concept
ReplyDeleteA ramp seems nice, it also can be use for handicapped. BTW nice presentation and groupwork. Well done guys. Keep it up!
ReplyDelete"You are killing us while you walk" may give a misunderstanding to visitors coming to the trail. Good verbal presentation.
ReplyDeleteClear presentation. Even though message about carbon emission is clear. dosent relate to trail and the trees
ReplyDeleteA very clear concept. Well organised presentation. Could explore more into the concept and made the brochure more interesting.
ReplyDeleteElisha : Very clear and obvious concept. The cover page title was turning off.Brochure was boring though, too plain and its quite big, so not very user friendly in terms of handling/keeping. Try to focus on objective of trail, which is highlighting importance of the existing plants/trees. But overall,presentation is clear and organized.
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