May 3, 2010

Primer 1: Presentation Review - Group E

Ho Soon, Affianah, Mei Lin, Noridah

2 comments:

  1. Good Comments:

    1. Good delivery of informations
    2. Very very detailed site analysis as expected... Overly detailed
    3. Great photoshop pictures, great drawings
    4. Good presentation of ideas
    5. Good combination of photoshop and sketches
    6. Impressive presentation

    Bad Comments:

    1. Give references
    2. Try to mix sketches around with pictures
    3. Wrong gradient for ramp
    4. No focus, topic too many

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  2. Elisha; Presentation was well done, very clear and detailed. Can see that alot of effort and hard work has been put in. Good usage of different medias to bring across ideas. However, should focus more on the purpose of the trail - Showing the significance of existing trees/plants. Group focused too much into designing the trail.

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